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Essential strategies and common pitfalls to help you ace the Report for Cambridge C2 Writing exam.

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How to write a C2 Report

The CPE Report is written for a specified audience. This may be a superior, for example, a boss at work, or members of a peer group, colleagues or fellow class members. The content of a report is mainly factual and draws on the prompt material.

C2 proficiency (CPE) Report: Structure

IntroductionThe purpose of this report is to...
Main Body – Subheading (2)

Give the relevant facts

Main Body – Subheading (3)Give the relevant facts
Main Body – Subheading (4)Give the relevant facts
3rd body paragraphYour opinion
ConclusionMake your recommendations

C2 proficiency (CPE) Report: Writing Guide

We will use the example topic below:

Your employer recently paid for you to attend a short evening course at a local college on ‘descriptive writing’. The Editor has asked you to write a report in which you evaluate the course content, organisation and method. She has also asked you to assess the usefulness of the course for yourself and for colleagues who might wish to attend the course in the future.

Write your Report (280 – 320 words)

Step 1: Title and Introduction

In general, the introduction should outline the aim of the report. Commonly, it begins with an indirect phrase like the one below:

The objective of this report is to compare... and...

The objective of this report is to outline the current condition of

An example of an introduction written by a student:

Example:

Introduction: The aim of this report is to exhibit evaluations of the efficiency and the structure of the ‘descriptive writing course, which has been conducted (passive forms) in the local college. The assessments provided are founded on my personal observations, accumulated during the course.

As you probably noticed, the report is written impersonally, goes straight to the point, is short, coherent and passive forms dominate. The author of the report avoids addressing the reader directly (you).

Step 2: Main Body

💡 QUICK TIPS: Before you start…

It is recommended to use headings and lists so that the reader can quickly find the information they are looking for in your text.
Do not personalise your report (I, YOU, WE) it should be general information that has facts, figures and sources.
No colourful and descriptive language – fabulous, remarkable etc.
Get straight to the point
Base your arguments on imaginary sources, data and figures. The more realistic your report looks, the better the grade.

Let’s see the main body of the sample student report:

In the first paragraph, the student writes the first element, i.e. content (“write a report in which you evaluate the course content, organisation and method.”)

Example:

Content – heading / short and informative

The content of the course was clearly structured (passive forms) and exceptionally well presented. It emphasizes each key aspect separately which, combined with a plethora of additional details provided, contributes greatly to its being easy to follow and comprehensive. Many of the foundational facets of the course were accurately exemplified (passive forms) by the means of impressive schemes and diagrams.

In the second paragraph, the student answers the second element, i.e. organisation (“write a report in which you evaluate the course content, organisation and method.”)

Example:

Organisation – heading / short and informative

In terms of conducting, the event was run in a highly professional manner. The time schedules were meticulously complied (passive forms) with and the relocations from one hall to another had been made effortless and time-efficient through the medium of clear instructional sign tables. The lecturers were given (passive forms) excellent positions to speak from and the audience had the opportunity to immerse in both the visual presentation and the lecturer’s speech.

In the third paragraph, the student answers the third element, i.e. method (“write a report in which you evaluate the course content, organisation and method.”)

Example:

Method – heading / short and informative

The teaching method adopted by the organisers of the event is traditional and straightforward. It enables the attendants not only (inversion) to understand but also to summarize the information without the necessity lecturers’ speech to be interrupted or delayed. The course visitors were provided with (passive forms) miscellaneous writing materials by the means of which notes could be conveniently made.

Step 3: Conclusion

Let’s see the conclusion of the same sample student report:

Example:

In the final analysis, (cohesive devices) impressions are entirely positive and strongly supportive in terms of further engaging in the course by me as well as other employees of the company. The usefulness of the ‘descriptive writing’ course can be considered exceptionally high and recommend the development of the latter (referential words) to be upheld financially by the company. This action should be regarded as an investment in the future qualifications of the workers.

See Full Report

The aim of this report is to exhibit evaluations of the efficiency and the structure of the ‘descriptive writing course, which has been conducted in the local college. The assessments provided are founded on my personal observations, accumulated during the course.

Content
The content of the course was clearly structured and exceptionally well presented. It emphasizes each key aspect separately which, combined with a plethora of additional details provided, contributes greatly to its being easy to follow and comprehensive. Many of the foundational facets of the course were accurately exemplified by the means of impressive schemes and diagrams.

Organisation
In terms of conducting, the event was run in a highly professional manner. The time schedules were meticulously complied with and the relocations from one hall to another had been made effortless and time-efficient through the medium of clear instructional sign tables. The lecturers were given excellent positions to speak from and the audience had the opportunity to immerse in both the visual presentation and the lecturer’s speech.

Method
The teaching method adopted by the organisers of the event is traditional and straightforward. It enables the attendants to understand and summarize the information without the necessity lecturers speech to be interrupted or delayed. The course visitors were provided with miscellaneous writing materials by the means of which notes could be conveniently made.

Conclusions
The implications I was led to by my personal impressions are entirely positive and strongly supportive in terms of further engaging in the course by me as well as other employees of the company. I consider the usefulness of the ‘descriptive writing’ course exceptionally high and recommend the development of the latter to be upheld financially by the company. This action should be regarded as an investment in the future qualifications of the workers.

C2 Proficiency (CPE) Report: Common Mistakes

Recommended in the Report

Inversion (not only / no sooner / seldom)
Inverted conditional (Were we to..)
Participle clause (Being... / Having gone...)
Double comparative (The more we... the more...)
Passive structures (The committee has been informed about...)
Cleft sentence (What is most crucial is...)
Linkers (Notwithstanding / despite / due to / consequently)

Not recommended in the Report

Descriptive writing and colourful language (stunning, gorgeous, amazing)
Idioms (are informal)
Phrasal Verbs (are informal)
Contractions (We’ve, It’s been said)
Giving personal opinions (I think, I guess)

C2 Proficiency (CPE) Report: Writing Checklist

After writing your report, you can check it yourself using the writing checklist below.

Content

Communicative Achievement

Organisation

Language

C2 Proficiency (CPE) Report: Tips

Remember that with almost any report your goal is to assess the topic of your report and provide your target reader with an evaluation of the topic and some recommendations based on it.
Your target reader is someone in authority (a university professor, city council chair, a head of a committee, etc.) Read the task very carefully.
The title, subheadings (rubrics) are an integral part of the layout. Please use them.
Bullet points help you to structure your ideas and demonstrate the conventions of the task. At the same time, they limit the range of grammatical structures that you may demonstrate. Thus, use bullet points but only in one of the sections of your report.
The task identifies the subject of the report and specifies the areas to be covered. The content is thus mainly factual but you need to use your own ideas to add necessary detail and come up with possible problems and solutions.
You need to demonstrate an awareness of the language commonly used in reports: comparing, analysing, making recommendations.
Your conclusion should be effective and persuasive.

C2 Proficiency (CPE) Report: What to Focus On

The examiners are looking at the following criteria:

Language

It is necessary to properly and precisely use a wide array of words and expressions, including rarely used ones. The text should include both simple and complex grammar expressions.

The vocabulary also has to be rich and diverse.

Communication

It is necessary to maintain the convention of a report or essay in English, such as clear division into paragraphs, headings, bullet points.

The text should be easy to understand for the target reader.

Organization

The text should be consistent and very well organized using a wide array of copulas and internal references.

Content

Every sentence in the text should refer to the topic of the assignment, and all the tasks specified in it should be fulfilled.

C2 Proficiency (CPE) Report: Useful Phrases & Expressions

We'll wrap up with some useful vocabulary commonly used to organize ideas. While it might feel like taking a shortcut, learning a few key expressions for each paragraph type can help you produce a well-structured and cohesive text in your exam.

Introduction (the goal of the report)

The purpose/aim of this report is to...

This report sets out to...

The report will comment on...

Below is an explanation of...

The focus of this report is…

This report will offer an in-depth critique of...

Comparing and Contrasting

There is a world of difference between... and...

... and... are fundamentally similar

... and... bear little resemblance to each other

There is a clear distinction between... and...

...compares favourably with...

... and... are polar opposites

There is a yawning gap between... and...

There is a subtle difference between... and...

There is a growing disparity between rich and poor.

... is strikingly different to...

Giving Recommendations

In light of the above, we believe the following

measures should be adopted…

In the short/long term, we suggest you should consider…

My recommendations are as follows:…

In my view, in future, we should…

To improve the situation, we recommend…

It is recommended that…